I don’t like any of the men here. One is a obsessive creepy guy, the other blond one is rude and said to be worse that the creepy guy don’t try to sell him to me now(sorry my guy) and finally the one who never says a thing and think that totally different persons could be one, you’re really confuse boy(cheater vibes).
I know the author wants to make this a little funny but this is not something funny man, you are making her do things that don’t match her personality then turn her serious again, it’s weird.
“oh well, im a commoner now and im happy with it but yes, I’ll go to an aristocratic party with you, a high ranking noble, because ophelia have said that to YOU, yeah…you, the guy she hated the most but well its not like I know her that much to understand, right?” I’ll trust you and that other creepy man.”
“I don’t really know why I’m doing this, i mean, ophelia also wanted me to be adopted by her parents so they don’t suffer much and I leave them anyway but hey! Dont kiss my hand *blush* why are you holding my hand? *looks up* you know who also used to hold my hand? The girl we loved and it’s dead now *dead serius*
English it’s not my first language. I’m not attacking the author they are not going to see this & it’s just my opinion.
HoyTanghoy
Sigh
Emma092841679
I found out why I’m starting to dislike this:
I don’t like any of the men here. One is a obsessive creepy guy, the other blond one is rude and said to be worse that the creepy guy don’t try to sell him to me now(sorry my guy) and finally the one who never says a thing and think that totally different persons could be one, you’re really confuse boy(cheater vibes).
I know the author wants to make this a little funny but this is not something funny man, you are making her do things that don’t match her personality then turn her serious again, it’s weird.
“oh well, im a commoner now and im happy with it but yes, I’ll go to an aristocratic party with you, a high ranking noble, because ophelia have said that to YOU, yeah…you, the guy she hated the most but well its not like I know her that much to understand, right?” I’ll trust you and that other creepy man.”
“I don’t really know why I’m doing this, i mean, ophelia also wanted me to be adopted by her parents so they don’t suffer much and I leave them anyway but hey! Dont kiss my hand *blush* why are you holding my hand? *looks up* you know who also used to hold my hand? The girl we loved and it’s dead now *dead serius*
English it’s not my first language. I’m not attacking the author they are not going to see this & it’s just my opinion.