Chapter comment:
1. That final boss is funny and pitiful, also the game company sure is amazing for they have good script for their characters. I like the line the final boss said.
2. I like how the author wrote this. We cannot only feel the POV of the MC but also the monsters and other characters like these 2 Villain.
3. I like that they have explanation in this form (*yada.yada) at some part because it helps explain thing without too much art being used and avoiding waisted chapter.
4. I like the art, it improved so fast from chapter 1 with noticable art deficiency, but now it’s all good. I also like the coloring of the supposed to be effect of the game when monsters are vanishing (you know those colorful effect surrounding them.). Also the art for windows. And those sparkling thingy.
5. Like the game mechanics (if you’re a player you would understand). You give money not just transfer the transaction from window to window. You talk to people ang get skills, for example MC talk with Lady Priest to get skills. It feels like you really belongs to the world because you’re not only interacting verbally but also in action.
6. That they can interact with NPCs. ?
Though it reminds me of sword art online but! There are still a different feeling in here.
7. I like how the art and outfit of the other characters (extra) are also good looking, not boring and simple at all.
Bibi21
Chapter comment:
1. That final boss is funny and pitiful, also the game company sure is amazing for they have good script for their characters. I like the line the final boss said.
2. I like how the author wrote this. We cannot only feel the POV of the MC but also the monsters and other characters like these 2 Villain.
3. I like that they have explanation in this form (*yada.yada) at some part because it helps explain thing without too much art being used and avoiding waisted chapter.
Bibi21
4. I like the art, it improved so fast from chapter 1 with noticable art deficiency, but now it’s all good. I also like the coloring of the supposed to be effect of the game when monsters are vanishing (you know those colorful effect surrounding them.). Also the art for windows. And those sparkling thingy.
5. Like the game mechanics (if you’re a player you would understand). You give money not just transfer the transaction from window to window. You talk to people ang get skills, for example MC talk with Lady Priest to get skills. It feels like you really belongs to the world because you’re not only interacting verbally but also in action.
6. That they can interact with NPCs. ?
Bibi21
Though it reminds me of sword art online but! There are still a different feeling in here.
7. I like how the art and outfit of the other characters (extra) are also good looking, not boring and simple at all.